Uncrowned Early Reviews!

9/12/2019

"Why isn't this Elder Empire?"
--My friend Ian

"My favorite part was when Lindon bonded with Sophara, finally allowing him to undertake the Path of the Double Dragon."
--Andrew Rowe

"Still not enough fighting."
--My brother

"The tournament does not get interrupted by the Dreadgods."
--Will Wight

"This book would have been more fun if it were part of an elaborate simulation game."
--Will Wright

"Why isn't the next one out yet?"
--You on September 27th

"I was initially skeptical about the introduction of sexy vampires, but the supernatural love triangle really sold me."
--You on September 26th

"Why don't you just skip to the bloopers? In fact, don't write anything but bloopers."
--Anonymous

angry bell noises
--Little Blue

55 Comments

Ravi

9/12/2019 03:02:38 pm

That Will Wright guy should write some books.

9/12/2019 05:23:45 pm

I think your Wright!

Arch

9/12/2019 03:02:51 pm

Wow, really gonna kill my dreadgod theory like that Will, I thought we were friends

AdmiralZacbar

9/12/2019 03:12:30 pm

Agreed. I'm feeling personally attacked by that one.

Fiddler

9/12/2019 07:46:03 pm

It's waaay to early for that!

Brian

9/12/2019 10:34:16 pm

Idk, seems suspicious. Still kinda expecting it.

Lindon

9/13/2019 04:25:42 am

Ngl this makes the theory even more plausible 🤣

Eternal_Icarus

9/13/2019 09:34:10 am

That theory needed to be crushed!

Dylan

9/12/2019 03:04:13 pm

My favorite part was when Yerin finally stabbed Eithan
-An excited viewer

Wolfy

9/12/2019 03:06:01 pm

Preferred when Lindon did it
With Shera

Lashan

9/13/2019 09:44:01 am

Uh, Yerin can you poke him in the ribs again so I can take a screenshot?

Elliot

9/12/2019 03:05:29 pm

This book would've been better if it was out soon. Wait scratch the if the whole series was out sooner--Elliot

9/12/2019 03:06:19 pm

Your friend Ian knows what's up.

Asterion

9/12/2019 03:19:36 pm

My favorite part was when Lindon stepped down from fighting Cell and told Dross to fight him in his stead.
-Me on Sep. 25th

Michael

9/12/2019 04:58:17 pm

i lost it when he went super presence 2

Kaileonis

9/12/2019 05:29:32 pm

I hope that didnt take 16 chapters with a cliffhanger on each.

Sir Beaglton the 57th

9/13/2019 04:07:45 am

Don’t be silly, it took 24 chapters. And of course they all ended in cliffhangers.

Brother

9/12/2019 03:23:08 pm

There will never be enough fighting.

Medieval

9/17/2019 07:13:02 am

Yeah Will, your brother knows whats up! Hope there is more fighting in this one than the last one. I enjoyed it, but it really felt like a whole lot of set up for this one lol.

Jacob

9/12/2019 04:00:06 pm

Sexy vampires is so last year, should've been sexy werewolf's
-- Jacob Black

Also Jacob

9/13/2019 04:09:55 am

Needs more sexy infants.
--Also Jacob Black

'sexy' infant

9/13/2019 02:19:33 pm

.....

......

*Microexpression*

Madeline

9/15/2019 08:06:13 pm

Wait, seriously? Amazon already keeps recommending me sexy werewolf books (I've read too much fantasy, its recommendation algorithm is scraping the bottom of the fantasy barrel and breaking into fantasy romance), you mean I missed a chance to get a change of sexy love interest and am stuck with more werewolves?

Bamfious

9/12/2019 04:05:27 pm

Are you SURE the dreadgods don't interrupt the tournament?

Mark

9/12/2019 04:44:45 pm

Damn it now I know the tournament is going to get interrupted by Dread gods lol jk but I only believe two of these, your brother’s and us on sep 27th! Lol can’t wait

Diego

9/12/2019 05:50:25 pm

Won't his brother have read it already? T.T Nepotism!!!!(jk, its called insider privelages.)

Rosewater

9/12/2019 05:29:29 pm

There goes the dreadgods theory.....🤔🤔😔😔

Steve

9/13/2019 07:51:30 am

No way! This is dreadgod theory confirmed. Don’t buy the attempt to throw you off the trail

Jessica

9/12/2019 05:33:17 pm

I really like this Ian friend of yours.

Aarya

9/12/2019 05:38:46 pm

So we're really just gonna put spoilers in the reviews huh.

Ashley L.

9/12/2019 06:01:42 pm

"Why isn't the next one out yet?"
- Us on Sept 26th before 6 a.m.
What do you mean Sept 27th? Hahahaha!!! Other people must read slow! Or more accurately... Sleep is for the weak! I need answers! LoL!

Darren

9/12/2019 06:21:59 pm

some of us live at GMT+12 so it's practically the 27th when we receive the book

Samy

9/13/2019 03:18:18 am

I'm gmt +10 and got underlord well before the US.

Sileet

9/12/2019 09:04:23 pm

My favorite part was when Mercy used Suu's third form, (distructo)disk, and got shot up to final boss status after taking out 1/2 the competition!

Anxious

9/12/2019 11:20:38 pm

Why isn't craddle completes??!

P.E.T.S.B.

9/13/2019 01:08:41 am

What did you do to poor Little Blue in this book you monster?! We herby demand your ghoulish exploitation of innocent natural spirits and sacred beasts cease and desist posthaste or risk the wrath of almost dozens of the meanest keyboard warriors and angry revenge reviewers the likes of whom you’ve scarcely imagined! We will strike upon thine works with the fury of a thousand burning suns! You will never know a moment’s peace. When we are through with you, your legacy will be as vapor upon the wind! But not before your name becomes a curse of the lamented for an age and a day. And in the end as you lay sundered before us weeping for the end of your torment, your transgressions having been long etched into the very marrow of your now repentant bones, only then will we grant you the mercy of release and watch you fade into nothingness and obscurity. You’ve been warned Mr. Wight.

Naf

9/13/2019 09:27:37 am

Dude, that is the best comment. You really are emotionally invested into lil' blue.

Terminator

9/14/2019 03:55:47 am

Let it be known that the will of the God king has been revealed

Leigons!!!!!! Ready your keyboards

Jarthon

9/14/2019 07:55:03 pm

*Chorused voices* YES SIR!

9/13/2019 02:44:30 am

I was initially skeptical about the introduction of sexy vampires, but the supernatural love triangle really sold me.

Im quite certain that Yerin doesnt know what she feels about lindon and their way in to the future, but she certainly dosnt see sexy vampires in it. So she propably will perform some slicing and dicing on them, ^-_-^

Also, cultivater novels have something like body types and im certain lindons body type is: getting captured, has to work for peoplehe dont realy like.

For example in the ruines he became a slave, had to work, then got "freed" by eithan, to be locked again, fighting for survival. Then got locked up in the trials in black flame, then got locked up by the sky sworn, had to work for them. Locked himselfe in gohstwater and worked for himselfe, i think he likes himselfe, so this was new, then got captured again by akura, has to work for them.

The next after uncrownd seems to be new, sounds more like yerin gets captured by reigan shen who may thing yerin to be a good heir to his "legacy", So that would be new, maybe lindons body disposision is contagious?

Northstrider, well the good man would propably be aware of dros after uncrowned, so lindon might get captured again,,,

What i want to say is, with all that "getting captured", i dont see him doing anything love related, except from some awkward moments in close cabinets with yerin, xD

So, i call bulshit on the vampire triangle. ^_^

The assistant

9/16/2019 05:42:36 am

Well Dr the thing is that your quite wrong according to London's tendency to get himself trapped what about him getting trapped with vampires maybe or maybe after reading drosses xxx human mating lindon will finally move in with the vampires or

It can be a hint towards lindon and begins relationship u know with her blood shadow lindonxrubyxyerin

9/13/2019 09:01:38 am

I originally read it as "My favorite part was when Lindon bonded with Sephora."

Naturally, my next question: can you awaken a corporate entity? You'd probably have to be a real company man or woman.

This is most definitely what's in the next Elder Empire book.

Beta Reader #1 link

9/13/2019 09:56:48 am

Im still not sure about the revelation that Lindon was actually Ozriel all this time. It was a surprise but it made absolutely no sense plot wise. Too gimmicky, 5/7
-Beta Reader #1

Andrew

9/13/2019 06:35:13 pm

Love how you showed Dragonballl how to do an entire book on a single transformation sequence🥺

EXCESSIVE fan

9/14/2019 03:01:20 am

I would pay an extra 50 to have a copy now _ maybe auction signed copies of his books _ will be worth a fortune when the movies come out!

Mr., Mrs., and Miss Random

9/14/2019 09:50:01 am

Go Ian!

Tim

9/14/2019 02:26:03 pm

Hey Will! I just got the "New from Will Wight" notification email form Amazon because I follow your author profile there. So that's about how long it takes for Amazon to shove out those emails. Got it 30 seconds before posting this, and you listed the product a week or more ago if I recall.

Mars

9/14/2019 05:21:12 pm

Uncrowned #1 best seller on Amazon!!!!!! Great job Will Wight

bob

9/16/2019 02:13:50 am

**angry bob noises**
~drums~
the elder empire... it comes...
~drums, drums in the deep~

Nerevar

9/16/2019 11:55:45 am

Every day closer to the release my mind deteriorates further in suspense.
Hopefully the book will come out before I become full fledged Gollum. . .

The trash dimension

9/16/2019 01:58:20 pm

I like the part where Will didn't include any Orthos POVs. None of us were curious about that at all, right?

Troll

9/17/2019 11:10:34 pm

Sword sage = Valin is basically confirmed.

Steven Brown

9/18/2019 02:14:01 am

I agree will Little Blue.

9/20/2019 01:56:52 am

Finally, finishing all that pesky character development and world building to give us our sexy vampires. About Time!!!

Ian

9/26/2019 05:52:42 pm

"Why isn't the next one out yet?"
--Me on September 26th

In which we ramble on.
And by we, I mean me.