Since I'm vanishing again this week to write Elder Empire, I thought I'd leave you guys with the answer to a question I get asked all the time: how do I come up with names?
Now, in the interest of writing a streamlined blog post, I have boiled down my process of coming up with names into an arbitrary number of steps so that it sounds easier than it really is! Step 1.) What are you naming? This is more important than it sounds. When you're trying to name something, you have to know not only what it literally is (a country, a character, a famous goblet) but also what its role is in your story. When I named King Zakareth, one of the primary antagonists from the Traveler's Gate trilogy, I started off with two pieces of information: he's the king, he's not a good guy, and my characters start off thinking of him as this tyrannical dark lord. That immediately starts me thinking in the right direction. I'm not thinking of names like "Chad" or "Thimble" or "Hyberian Thimblewinter" because those don't sound like names for an evil king. Which brings me to the second step, which is... Step 2.) Make up a bunch of names. Just brainstorm. Using the guidance from Step 1, come up with a BUNCH of names. I use baby books, random name generators, darts thrown at boards, movie credits, consulting space oracles, any methods I can think of to come up with a bunch of names. Then I start whittling down the names to my favorites. This can take hours. I keep a running list on my phone, and whenever I run into or think of a cool-sounding name, I write it down. It gives me material when I hit this point again...but there's never enough on the list. Never enough. I spend a lot of time on this section. After you've populated such a list and narrowed it down to your favorites, you pick one and move on to Step 3. Step 3.) Does it sound cool? I was tempted to put "Is it appropriate to the setting?" here, because it's more important, but you can make a cool-sounding name setting appropriate. It's harder to take a setting-appropriate name and make it sound cool after the fact. This part is of course subjective, but it's still important. How does the name sound to you? A lot of times people get hung up on trying to find the perfect name for your character or your favorite magic sword, but at this point it's really more about sounding neat. This is also why step one is first: more important people, places, and things need cooler-sounding names. If a country is only going to be mentioned once as "the exotic land to the north ruled by sentient flies," you can just come up with a name off the top of your head. Zenethar. It's Zenethar now. If it's the country your characters live in, it bears a bit more thought. But it's also not just how it sounds to you, but also how it sounds to other people. Get your beta readers to tell you what they think of the names. If some names stand out as being not cool enough or too cool (your bartender's name doesn't need to be Arondolio the Magnificent), just change them. Step 4.) Is it appropriate to the setting? This is very important, but it comes fourth because I usually do it fourth. If you think your character is a Senator who should have an ordinary name, you might think of something like "Steve." But that doesn't fit your sci-fi setting, so maybe "Sheev" instead (do it). Steps 2 and 3 are where I play around with names the most, trying out variations. Since most of the Territories are named after mythological afterlives, I had the world's hardest time coming up with Valinhall's name. Seriously, it was a huge pain. But the breakthrough came when I thought of Valhalla (that took longer than you might imagine) and then played around with variations of the name until I came up with "Valinhall." That's a combination of Step 3 (looking for something that sounds cool) and Step 4 (making sure it's appropriate to your setting...and in this case, the setting was a world in which these magical dimensions are named after mythical locations). Step 5.) Avoid overlap. What else have you named? If you've got a main character named Simon, you probably don't want another major character named Saman. Or Sian. Or Sonim. You want to make sure that your most important names sound AND look as different from one another as possible. You have to consider both how the names sound when spoken out loud and how they look on the page. If one of your characters is named Simon and the other is named Lymann, you're never going to confuse that on the page, but you might out loud. Alternatively, Simon and Síman might be pronounced very differently, but they look almost exactly the same. But the main mistake people make is naming too many characters with the same first letter. Harry, Herbert, Helen, Humpty, and Huxtable are very different character names that you're not going to confuse, but it gets real mixed up when they're all sharing a scene. So anyway, that's how I do it. It's more of an art than a science, and I spend way too long on it during each book. One final tip: your reader makes the name work in their head. They will come to associate the qualities of the character with the name over time, even if the name doesn't suggest those qualities at the beginning. For example, "Palpatine" is not an especially evil-sounding or intimidating name. -Will
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Cookies
6/15/2019 10:22:52 am
I smell hopes increasing
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Cookies
6/15/2019 10:30:15 am
On a more related note, is that why many villains have "sharper" names?
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Jeremiah
6/15/2019 11:45:59 am
I am gathering more stars for my discord nick
Kandra
6/15/2019 01:50:35 pm
Bother, I have to give Hosoke more stars. I think I might run out after all...:/
Anthem
6/15/2019 10:36:23 am
This is exactly what I want to know from every author. I love learning the process behind names and how different authors go through this. I am ALWAYS thinking about this when reading books, playing games or listening to stories. Thank you so much.
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Lindon
6/15/2019 11:44:36 am
Hey, Will could you finish the seventh part of my biography. I'm losing fans the more you wait. Also, I will send you the rest of my story today.
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Shera
6/15/2019 03:23:33 pm
*points Syphren at Lindon*
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Exactly
6/15/2019 07:16:36 pm
Thank You!
Simon
6/16/2019 09:29:09 am
Yeah, well, yours keeps getting delayed. If anything, I should be next. *pulls out Mithra* *puts on mask*
Contrarian Raccoon
6/17/2019 09:23:08 am
Personally, I think Will should start a new series before thinking about continuing an ongoing one. It's the only choice that makes any sense.
Protagonist-kun
6/25/2019 09:05:49 pm
Hi there~
...also, Protagonist-kun, even in a parody I wouldn't make a romantic interest a thousand-year-old little girl.
Protagonist-kun
7/1/2019 08:56:11 pm
I'm glad you aged-up the lolis, Will. Frankly, that kind of thing might fly in Japan but in the US it's still weird.
Guy
6/15/2019 03:03:33 pm
Putting a book update at the beginning of a blog post?
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Ryan
6/15/2019 04:04:47 pm
Overlap is super annoying. Completely breaks the flow of the story for me
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Chris
6/15/2019 04:05:12 pm
Will I'm dying to know how you came up with Seshethkunaz. Was it a variation on a another name? A name generator? Another language? It's just so out there the I can't imagine where it came from.
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Lindon
6/16/2019 10:21:17 am
That's true. I heard it means"Devourer of Worlds."
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I wanted dragon names in Cradle to sound overly complicated, like a mouthful of jumbling syllables. Seshethkunaaz (I can never remember if it's two Us or two As so I always have to look it up) was one of the first I came up with, and I name the others based on that kind of sound.
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Jack Sprat
6/15/2019 07:57:37 pm
Overlap? Why worry about overlap? Why not make two of your major female protagonists have names that sound remarkably similar when you listen to the audiobook so your readers can be very confused when they mishear? You can call them Elaine and Egwene and have them never separate for large chunks of your first several books!
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I was so disappointed when I first read the pronunciation guide and realized that Egwene was supposed to sound like Eggwain.
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Dustin
6/15/2019 08:11:12 pm
I never understand this. I may be unique, but names mean practically nothing to me. I get the not wanting to use similar sounding or duplicate names for characters, but spending a lot of time formulating names just doesn't make sense to me. You said it at the end of your post WIll, readers make the names work and come to associate the traits of the character with the name.
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Generic name generator
6/15/2019 08:30:17 pm
A cool name is an enhancer that can make a setting shine. Put names you hear everyday in a fantasy setting and it can sound like a beginner's dand campaign. Not nearly as cool when Steve and Mary beat Wally as when frodo and aragorn beat sauron. Also... London wasnt supposed to be very strong or cool... he was a cripple.
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Dustin
6/17/2019 11:57:12 am
I'm not saying it doesn't do that for you or others. Like I said, I've never understood it though. I'm not saying characters should be named Humpledink Dinglelinger IV or anything like that, but no name has ever added anything to a story for me. A generic name is as good as any name for me.
My last point is very important, and it is kind of a counterpoint to the rest: a well-established character will make the name, rather than vice-versa, as long as you haven't done something REALLY off the wall (Humpledink Dinglelinger IV).
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Robert
6/15/2019 10:24:58 pm
That is a really involved process but it makes a lot of sense. Reminds me of how comedians are always making notes and observations for potential jokes times 10.
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Cool Person
6/24/2019 08:00:44 pm
Oh wow... you're right. He IS a turtle
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Madeline
6/29/2019 08:41:29 am
Or it could be a case of what Will said before, sacred beasts' bodies change as they age to be more "ideal" for their path. So if a sacred house cat would eventually look nothing like a house cat as it advanced further and further, it's reasonable to think that a turtle with destructive dragon madra might become more tortoise like (since turtles are built to swim, and Orthos cannot fly, so he isn't a swims through air turtle) in the interest of being mobile while on the ground. Such a turtle would probably still call itself a turtle, like the dragons who take on human form as they advance call themselves dragons, because that's how it started out.
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So my initial reasoning for this is that "turtle" sounds way better than "tortoise."
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Bunny Fu fu
6/15/2019 10:57:23 pm
I'm so glad you included that last part. I've literally stopped reading books because authors make following characters hard with their naming. It shouldn't require pencil and paper to keep track of a story line because of naming.
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Absolutely, though I learned a lot of these things by screwing them up.
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John O'Connor
6/15/2019 11:19:53 pm
If only Christopher Nuttall checked his names before publishing. One of his main characters was called Vas Deferens. True, he was a dick but really? Recently I read a series which had 3 characters with the same first name. Now that was confusing. There are some books where the author gets fancy with the names and just don't bother trying to use them in my mind. They just become "that guy". Keep it relatively simple and make the reader live the story not do mental gymnastics with names.
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RedskinRobbie
7/4/2019 06:21:36 am
When reading, I change weird overly difficult names into something easier for m my brain to digest. Seshethkunaaz=Seth and that's how I see it for the rest off the book. This is why I can't use Audible for some authors.
Fyodor Mikhailovich Dostoevsky
6/16/2019 05:45:01 am
If only I had known!! Oh well, too late now. . .
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Where for art thou Bill!?!
6/16/2019 08:35:37 am
Hi Will,
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Desperate Fan
6/16/2019 09:17:12 pm
I second a visit from Bill. He's just got that mischievous gleam in his eyes. You just know he's plotting something devious. There's so much going on in there...
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Sword Immortal Darknorth
6/20/2019 12:07:25 pm
I must say, I too am a Bill fan. I can't wait to hear more about his plans for world domination and how we will all fit into his scheme to make alligators the dominant species.
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Lindon
6/16/2019 10:19:00 am
You all can get in line!!!! (Channels Blackflame and prepares to perform Void Dragon's Dance.)
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Extesian
6/16/2019 05:46:28 pm
I favor a schema of adjective-latin suffix greek prefix-noun the adverb
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Cheese Doodle
6/17/2019 08:44:08 am
Thank you for sharing this! I always wonder how people come up with names and this makes a lot of sense.
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Contrarian Raccoon
6/17/2019 09:21:27 am
Naming your characters with naming conventions used by real life cultures is also going to make the reader associate them with the traits of said culture.
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jj
6/18/2019 04:16:05 pm
Cradle got me back into reading books. Hadn't read novels recreationally for years. Looking forward to book 7 😉
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Madeline
6/19/2019 10:41:31 am
I really want to see Hyberian Thimblewinter, Sage of the Frozen Trees, in Cradle now.
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Madeline
6/30/2019 07:53:09 pm
In the blog post. Fifteen days ago.
The Nag
6/19/2019 04:20:46 pm
Yes, it’s me again, and I’m going to say relatively nothing about this post, other than the fact that I found it interesting. Sheev Palpatine is really an odd name, but since we all associate it with that evil creep, it’s quite menacing now.
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Doctor W
6/21/2019 05:26:50 pm
This has bothered me a few times when reading it; how do you pronounce Akura? I assume "Ah-koo-ruh." However, the way it's spelled also makes me think "Ah-kyu-rah," (a la Acura). I'm assuming it's the more ethereal first pronunciation and not the car, yes?
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What makes you think I'm sponsored by Acura, the kings of precision-crafted performance? Are you suggesting that every time Mercy is in a scene, I wanted the reader to be subconsciously thinking about the mercifully divine Acura TLX, the perfect blend of economy and luxury?
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Cool Person
6/22/2019 11:07:23 am
2 things:
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Lindon
6/25/2019 11:27:34 am
Have you ever thought of making cradle an anime. I personally think with the right studio it could be a huge hit.
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Tim
6/25/2019 09:09:25 pm
Will has said if Cradle sells 40 million copies he will have the budget to do this.
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Lindon
6/27/2019 09:01:20 am
Dang, well I hope it sells 40 million copies.
I don't RECALL saying that about 40 million copies, but it is true. If Cradle sells 40 million copies, I'll have the budget to do just about anything.
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Jonathan
6/28/2019 08:01:13 am
Naming characters is always a fun exercise, but Will seems to have forgotten a portion of the process. The initial name of a character can do several things; highlights personal initial characteristics, or future characteristics. In Lindon's case it seems sort of childish, and his name seems to reflect that.
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Lindon
6/28/2019 02:28:36 pm
That honestly sounds really dope. "The Overlord of Twin Stars" or "The Twin Star Sage."
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Sage of Obsessive Reading
6/29/2019 07:36:04 am
It could even be shortened, like how the Sage of Red Faith is the “Blood Sage”, The Sage of Twin Stars could be the Star Sage
Very true! It's a useful technique to have characters refer to each other by different names, because that can characterize both characters. Good catch!
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nick
7/1/2019 12:27:19 pm
Danm you Will! You tricked me into rereading the books!
A random cultivator
6/28/2019 10:45:59 pm
Have you ever thought of developing a game in the cradle universe
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Scott Nichols
6/29/2019 09:26:38 am
I'm re reading house of blades and I'm realizing as I read that Will probably learned the bit about too similar names from his own experience of naming Alin and Valin, it is distracting in my own head reading them
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Scott
7/2/2019 10:13:08 am
I've gotten to where I try to pronounce it in my head as A(y)lin just so they're different. Though then sometimes I mix them up in my head still and I pronounce Valin as Va(Y)lin but then I stop and think about reading Valinhall as Va(y)linhall and that just sounds silly. It's rather somewhat funny now because I can't stop doing it. And now I'm thinking about how to pronounce those parentheses I wrote in to mark the Y's. I...might be a little odd come to think of it.
That guy
7/4/2019 09:41:16 am
Sooo, not to be that guy but have you ever considered making a tiny pudgy antagonist with an annoying laugh/personality?
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maedhros
7/5/2019 08:08:07 pm
This blog post makes me happy. I just came here curious about any news regarding OKAK, and what do you know, a recent blog post about working on it! I love (and own) all of your (published) books, but I have been starting to miss the Elder Empire lately.
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Lauren
9/26/2023 06:21:38 pm
I just started reading the series and keep second guessing how to pronounce character names. Is there a recoding of how to pronounce them? I’ve searched and have come up empty. Thanks!
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